The Long version is about 3,000 words now, but the Short version is about 400. I do not think I did the story justice in the short version though, but if it does sound interesting I recommend reading it (please).
I am always looking for new ideas to add to the story, so if you have one I would love to hear it. Just post a comment and I will mention it and you on the next entry.
As always, thanks for reading it.